Expression of Odyssey - a poem in 5 parts - care to comment?

Question: Expression of Odyssey - a poem in 5 parts - care to comment!?

Odyssey
By Jellz Fisher 080730

Eau de sea

H2O
Through and through!.
Chemical!.
Silt to surface!.
Na filled!.
Not heart healthy!.
Hardly
good for us!.

Oh the sea

Oceans of dreams turn
Waving madness leaves me tied
Land-bound, bed-bound, spent

Ode de sea

I have always come
at your calling
Men of ages
like me, falling
Under your spell
rolling rip
Dragging, coaxing
stumbling, trip!.
Fighting, losing
succumbing to fate!.
The sea and I are one
too late!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The sea is your veins, Jellz!. The imagery of the 4th Stanza
is stunning!.!.!.How do you say it!? Good on ya!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i thot the 3rd 4th & last 2 lines of the 5th verse were quite good tho not sure mixing styles quite works!.Www@QuestionHome@Com