Guten Abend! Do you like my new poem?

Question: Guten Abend! Do you like my new poem!?

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AXLEROD von FENDERFLAIR, NOTED EXPLORER
AND NATURALIST, ENJOYS HIS VISIT
WITH THE GRANDCHILDREN

I’ve got a 1/64 scale working model
of the Universe,
with cyclic action!.

It is the wind-up kind,
you crank it for few eons
then let her go…

It is so much fun to watch the kids
contemplate their fates while the thing
spins and flips!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Schwarze comedy, sehr gut! Danke!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ausgezeichnet! I look forward to a few cycles of fun mit meine kleine Kinderlein, watching them got through the spins and flips! Ah, the wonders of grandkids! Just wind them up and watch them go and grow! Mine usually dump out the toys and then the box becomes a wonderful plaything!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like!.!.!. how!.!.!. existentialist!.!.!.

deep in a 'lets make fun of ourselves' kind of way

provoking

nice and short

7/10

-stsWww@QuestionHome@Com

As my old friend Archimedes used to say, "Give me someone clever and I can move the Earth!." He would then turn to me after we had eaten and ask, "Are you full, crumb!?"Www@QuestionHome@Com

It seems sorta dark and very wonderous to me!. And it's like in a way it's filled with hopes of the young and inocennt, you know!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was, by far, the best laugh of the day--Thanks man; I needed that!.
1/64 scale--that thing must be huge!.
Yes--yes, the question!. Yes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am completely offended!. Where in the name of God should I ask the explorer for another scale work!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I hope F!.A!.O Schwartz will have them on sale for Christmas!.!.!.
I also hope it is rewindable! Good toymakers are hard to find!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is that the 2007 model with detachable Pluto!?

(Props to Duncan W - good call!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Guten morgen!. Ja!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like a gyro-scope to me!.!.!.!.!.Oh, the toys (joys) of childhood!.!.!.
Pull the string!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't like cranks!. Insert batteries!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

God at home!.Www@QuestionHome@Com