Question Home

Position:Home>Poetry> Poem....critque! Thanks?


Question: Poem!.!.!.!.critque! Thanks!?
I know it's getting freezing but I can't help the sun,
Stop pointing all your fingers at what everyone has done,
You have your own problems so don't complicate the truth,
Cause in the morning I will wake and see what I've been through!.

I wrote a poem and it consisted of you,
All the words were made of ink that looked so untrue,
So I crawled into a hole just to keep myself warm,
I'm hiding from your lies and accusations!.

I held onto your hand for a hell of a ride,
Now I'm looking at the feelings as they all subside,
Into a mess thats on your front porch,
So clean it all up and I'm the only ****!.

I had a favorite song but it's such a shame,
I can't listen to it anymore, it's all the same,
It reminds me of you and everything we've done,
So I know it's freezing but I can't help the sun!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
omg!
i love it :D

you need to send that in for like a poem book or make your own!
write more

i want more more more!
" I know it's getting freezing but I can't help the sun "Www@QuestionHome@Com

I absolutely loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
<33333
Can I steal;"I know it's getting freezing but I can't help the sun,
Stop pointing all your fingers at what everyone has done," from you!? plzplzplz its very cool!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow is all I can really say!. Actually I can say it was extremely fantastic!. I can't wait to hear more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I may not know all about 'peom writing', but I really got the message from yours!. Good going!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!
that is absolutely amazing!.
you're a great writer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great!.!.!.!.keep writingWww@QuestionHome@Com

that was AWESOME! i LOVED it! and i dont throw that word around too freely!. ; )Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG I LOVE IT!
IM NOT JUST SAYING THAT!
trust me its goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

NiceWww@QuestionHome@Com