How is my minute poem?

Question: How is my minute poem!?

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I had a pair of leather shoes
I loved to use;
And everywhere,
I wore that pair!.

The soft brown glow of cordovan
Implored even
My snobbish friends
To overspend!.

O strong steel shank! Alas, by might
And jealous spite,
The TSA
Stole you away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I'm very sorry about your shoes, and yet I can only be glad that they inspired this funny-bone touching minute poem!. Very good!. Damn TSA!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Loved it but it felt a little unfinished!. Could you add two lines at the end that give it a surprizing twist or that restate its point!.

Reminded me a little bit of Sylvia Plath but not so dark as she!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It was funny!. I also loved S2 (clever lines)!. This little form is more involved than it initially appears!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

luv'n it!.
good job! you did wellWww@QuestionHome@Com

Not bad but you have to change a few words!.You could have done a lot better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice!. good humor, well done!.
9!.9/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

4 out of 5Www@QuestionHome@Com

No offence but i didn't understand
and it sucksWww@QuestionHome@Com

Form and Humor! Your Stanza2 is rich!Www@QuestionHome@Com