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Question: Should I continue!?
My last offering contained a variation on Kilmer!. Should I continue to offer improvements of the Old Masters!? For instance:
How do I love you!? let me count the ways
I love you more than mayonnaise!.
Or!.!.!.maybe I should stop now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Oh no, you should never stop!. We all thrive from laughter, it is the best medicine!. Right now!.!.!.some of us could use to overdose!. I love you more than mayonnaise too, then again, I was always a fan of Miracle Whip!.!.!.who knows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now, this is a story all about how
My life got flipped-turned upside down
And I liked to take a minute
Just sit right there
I'll tell you how I became the prince of a town called Bel Air

In west Philadelphia born and raised
On the playground was where I spent most of my days
Chillin' out maxin' relaxin' all cool
And all shootin some b-ball outside of the school
When a couple of guys
Who were up to no good
Started making trouble in my neighborhood
I got in one little fight and my mom got scared
She said 'You're movin' with your auntie and uncle in Bel Air'

I begged and pleaded with her day after day
But she packed my suite case and send me on my way
She gave me a kiss and then she gave me my ticket!.
I put my walkman on and said, 'I might as well kick it'!.

First class, yo this is bad
Drinking orange juice out of a champagne glass!.
Is this what the people of Bel-Air living like!?
Hmmmmm this might be alright!.

But wait I hear they're prissy, wine all that
Is Bel-Air the type of place they send this cool cat!?
I don't think so
I'll see when I get there
I hope they're prepared for the prince of Bel-Air

Well, the plane landed and when I came out
There was a dude who looked like a cop standing there with my name out
I ain't trying to get arrested
I just got here
I sprang with the quickness like lightning, disappeared

I whistled for a cab and when it came near
The license plate said 'FRESH' and it had dice in the mirror
If anything I can say this cab is rare
But I thought 'Now forget it' - 'Yo homes to Bel Air'

I pulled up to the house about 7 or 8
And I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo homes smell ya later'
I looked at my kingdom
I was finally there
To settle my throne as the Prince of Bel AirWww@QuestionHome@Com

Oh please everyone needs humor in there life , I love what you did here if that is an example of trashing the poem, it's fun and not at all in anyway disrespectful,

Just humorous-- I had a dear friend that has his own band and they would take well know songs and do the same type of thing! It was hilarious and fun!!

Make us laugh, we all need a good chuckle, have you done more like this!? Can you post the link so that I may read some!? Thanks! and a cheerio Cheers!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like mayonnaise, Dijon mustard, pineapple, and baked chicken on sour dough bread!.!.!. after I eat !.!.!.I may follow your avatar to oblivion or at least a couple of mouse clicks, who knows!.!.!. but please continue with the count!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Please continue!. I am trying to convince someone I know to do something permanent with kidney-Sydney rhymes!. It may not happen, but I would love to see a tasty series!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Most definitely stop!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Continue!. I need a good laugh once in a while to balance the rest of life!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No don't stop!. If poetic music is the food of life, play on!.!.!.!. words!Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Yes I say continue!"!.!.!.!.!.
WELL DONE!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't stop! You've already given me one bruised rib, what's one more!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

go on, by all means!
it promises to be a real rib-buster!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes, maybe u should stop :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Please go on!.!.!.your humor is a bright part of my day :)Www@QuestionHome@Com