How do you like tomorrow's poem?

Question: How do you like tomorrow's poem!?

Monday
by C!.S!. Scotkin

Monday comes,
it always comes
I’ll arise at four!.

Where is the sun!?
No shadows to
stripe my walls or floor!.

By five, I know
I’ll be awake,
Ready for the door!.

Make me aware
all through my rounds,
see into the core!.

See divinity
in those I touch!.
I can do no more!.

I can do no less!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

V1 line 3
I will rise
is better than
I'll arise
otherwise great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was a simple, pretty lyric and I love it!. Mondays are always reminders of a week of work! but the Friday is the day I love!. Friday evening!. A saturday and sunday ahead to feel free!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely poem Cynthia! I am not a morning person, and I really wish I was!.

I think I might just wake up early tomorrow! Whoa, thanks for the inspiration!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What time does the Sun rise there!? Mine's not up until 'bout quarter after five!. Before that everything's still in shadow!. An hour later--I am!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very prettyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Where is the sun!?
No shadows fall
upon my walls or floor!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

In the words of Randy Jackson "It was just OK for me"Www@QuestionHome@Com