{Wrote this last month!.!.!.I'd love feedback!. also, what should this remain!? A poem or a song!? And if you think a song, any ideas of a melody!?}
"Writhing In My Solitude"
The love I had been longing for
So many years I stood and waited
Crying tears of selfish pity
Slowly becoming worn and jaded
Then my red eyes fell upon your face
As though a spotlight cast your brilliant figure
I knew that instant you were my savior
The thought of this will forever linger
Writhing in my solitude
My head held by clenched hands
Eyes rolling back inside their sockets
Reaching for you as I stand
Where is your voice, my darling
It's been silent without your calling
So long since I've traced your lips
Your face is needed to stop my fallingWww@QuestionHome@Com