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Question: What do you think of my first ever Double Tetractys:!?
Tetractys
Tetractys, a poetic form invented by Ray Stebbing, consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10
syllables (total of 20)!. Tetractys can be written with more than one verse, but must follow suit
with an inverted syllable count!. Tetractys can also bereversed and written 10, 4, 3, 2, 1!.

Double Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1

Triple Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3, 4, 10

and so on!.

"Euclid, the mathematician of classical times, considered the number series 1, 2, 3, 4 to have mystical
significance because its sum is 10, so he dignified it with a name of its own - Tetractys!. The tetractys
could be Britain's answer to the haiku!. Its challenge is to express a complete thought, profound or
comic, witty or wise, within the narrow compass of twenty syllables!." - Ray Stebbing

Double Tetractys!.


How
Many
Neuron cells,
Does brain contain!?
Before our Glial Cells turn to glia,
From viewing the beauty of Mary-Jane,
Fried, sizzled meat
Balls now stew
Chef Mary,
Jane!

Alternative endingsā€¦!.!.

1!.
World now gone crazy,
Saying her
Name Mary-
Jane!.

2!.
World gone insane
Saying her
Name!.

3!. Boys happily,
Go insane
Desire
More!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You
Must be
Trippin' out
On Mary Jane!.
Does she pervade each crevice of your brain!?
Does even one good synapse now remain!?
Or have they all
Gone up in
One last
Smoke!.
Yoke
Your mind
To a new
Recreation
Your poor buzzed brain may need a vacation!.
Try trippin' on books, avoid the Play Station!.
One addiction
That allows
You to
Grow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Funny, I am only guessing at glial and glia!. Mary-Jane though is a "old phrase" for a product which will probably date you!. Why not pick up all the current and past names for this product and make a poem titled: "A Mary Jane is still a Mary Jane"!. Now that should prove to be "smoking" hot!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Asked
my muse
She told me
"What is the use!?"
I try so hard to lead you to greatness,
But now you have got yourself in a mess!.
Write from your heart,
Ignore the form!.
Be honest,
Have fun!.
Laugh!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whew Galactica , I getting too old to remember all that!! LOL Good Job !! Cheers !!Www@QuestionHome@Com