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Question: I have a song I would like your opinion on!!?
Yesterday will be a memory
Tomorrow an impossibility
I stand upon this pedastal
It will pave my personal road to hell
Dying to live, Living to die
Sharpen the blade and end my life

Remember her face
Your last disgrace
Silence my only friend
The only thing there in the end

[Chorus]

Carve her name into your arm
Bring your life mortal harm
You will never see the dawn
Always bein' second best
Jab the knife into your chest
No regrets!

[Chorus]

You fantasize the agony
Oh how much you would be pleased
As you bow onto your knees
You realize your destiny

Take away your life
End your world of spite
Fight it off with might
You'll only end the light

The world is in your hands
You have the master plan
Be you god or man
Mortality demands

[Chorus]

Carve her name into your arm
Bring your life -- mortal harm
You will never see the dawn
Always bein' second best
Jab the knife into your chest
---No regrets!

[Chorus]

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The emotional influence is obviously there!.!. and the lyrics are pretty powerful; I especially like "The world is in your hands / You have the master plan / Be you god or man / Morality demands" - in a situation where suicidal thoughts become overwhelming, the world is literally in your hands, as you make that decision to end your life or not, so I think that stanza is emphasized pretty well!. Overall, I like the lyrics (:Www@QuestionHome@Com

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