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Question: Please comment/interpret/critique my new poem!. It would mean a lot to me!. Please!.!?
' If I knew'

If I knew where I was going, I'd go!.

Love is beautiful, love is destructive!.
And so am I!.

Hate is ugly, hate is destructive!.
And so am I!.

I am pure!.
And I sin!.

I am whole!.
also broken!.

I am somebody!.
Miss nobody!.

I know everything!.
I know nothing!.

I am here!.
I am there!.

My body is flexible, standing still!.
My soul is a preconceived notion!.

If I knew where I was going, I'd go!.
I'd take you with me if I could!.
Would you come along!?

If I knew!.!.




Sarah JWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sarah, Sarah, Sarah, What kind of poem is that!? I'd would call it light hearted , do you have any more!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it alot you should write moreWww@QuestionHome@Com

Simple and pure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com