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Question: Important to me!.What does this poem mean to you!? What do you think of it!?Please comment and interpret!.!?
I wrote this in 5 minutes!.

It's called!.!.

' What !?'

Is it strange to want to fill a cavity!?
Afterall, the decay is not only our own work!.

Sex, drugs and rock n roll!.
Does it ring a bell!?
A right to a high after all the blows!.

What is a weakness!?
Fear through and through!.

What is a strength!?
The strongest pain within!.!.!.
!.!.!. Hidden and unhidden!.

What is love without hate and hate without love!?
A disturbed cycle of nature, disturbed!.

What is a life without meaning!?
When you cease to create!.

What is a way to die!?
That is a way to die!.

Sarah JWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like what you are attempting but each is lacking for more development!. You have attempted too much!. Maybe rework to 3 or 4 separate looks, (poems)!. Your first stanza is a strong opening!. "Is it strange to want to fill a cavity, afterall the decay was your handiwork!." A good start, now do what most do: edit, edit, and rewrite!. The process really helps to clarify the message!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ummm I think the “drugs” part is referring to “that is a way to die”……maybe strength means you don’t do drugs but everyone is like just do it!.(why do people always say dude when they are high anyways lol)
**never got high but know people who do**Www@QuestionHome@Com