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Question: What think you of a rainy, carousel Night!?
Mantles of incorrigible
Tin-rain wrap me!.!.!.
The present of sleep,
Ribboned in dreams,
Bows peek-a-booing
A card!.!.!.

Once more!. Tomorrow!.
Carousels, cotton candy
Freedom of sleep
Tonight!.

Love,
Life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Elyslund,

You are the fresh breeze that sweeps clean the murmur and bramble of our lives!. Your words fills my dryness as if the desert of my soul becomes an ocean teaming with aquatic life unknown and unspoiled by the touch of man!.!.!. The poetry gods him or herselves blessed us with your mind's eye and expanding universe!. You are my mother nature of imagination and for that I am eternally greatful! (And that goes for everything you have shared with us all!.!.!.) Kudos and praise be -Www@QuestionHome@Com

The mention of combination of carousel and dreams so makes me think of the Joni Mitchell song "Circle Game" Thank you Elys!

I love that song and JM is a musical/lyrical hero of mine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The south-west monsoon is active back home, with rainy days at a stretch!.
Yes freedom of sleep, with rain tapping on your window!.
Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That rain better stay pitter patter because I been under those tins when the big boys come to dance and ear plugs plus are needed! Sweet dreams on your carousel!. Just don't fall off reaching for the ring! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Awww something about this is soooo intriguing!! Grabbing the child within!!
CheersWww@QuestionHome@Com

I really like it, Elys!.!.!.!.I want the carousels and cotton candy part of life!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dreamy!. Great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm goin' round in the same circles!. Sleep well!. Think deep thoughts!. Love life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it would be fun to ride a carousel in the rain!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

beautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com

That sounds so pretty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good Work Elys!.!.!.!.and I am caught between that great phrase!.!.!.'Freedom of sleep'Www@QuestionHome@Com

Rain on a tin roof!.!.!.!.!. taps me off to dreamland every time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Soft rain, tin roof, soft bed!.!.!.a blissful poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com