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Question: The Nightingale song!?please honest answers serious poets,!?
The grave gates are open
The stars start to fall
The lost girl is there looking
Up to catch the heaven wall
She would die if she was another one
But she holds the little faith
She tries to think about something else
While the sand slip between her hands
She can’t survive more
Specially with thunders around
The death, isn’t so far away
She just has to wait
For the sky to turn gray
She is still catching the path with her shaking legs
The wind is slamming her so far
The people she knows forget her pain
And all she has to do is wondering
Will it be ever colorful again!?
She just has to fall
From this tattered thread
It has to be one move
Her life did reach the end
As she said
I wish you all a good life
She says in welcoming voice
Life is a lie after all
And Ive believed it so far
She was looking at the entrance
And hearing over the rainbow song
She will run through the green meadows
And find the claming breeze
Welcome death she said to it
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i am not a poet,but i am serious in reading it,and i have tried writing,i like that actually i have felt like that but obviously i am male,its sad,and deep you can feel it,battered and torn,if its you i wish you well,and hope you find peAce in your life,i know the feeling!.and i am trying,and thats all we can do some times!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow amazing poetry!! that was awesome!!Www@QuestionHome@Com