Please read my poems...(they rhyme)....What do you think of them?

Question: Please read my poems!.!.!.(they rhyme)!.!.!.!.What do you think of them!?

In the past 3 weeks i have started to write poetry!. These are what i have so far:

http://l3luel3ubbles!.piczo!.com/mypoems!?p!.!.!.

Please be aware that i am only 15 and i am new to writing poetry!. I would also like to point out that only spend about 15 mintues on each poem as i am very busy!.

Which poem is your favourite and why!?

Any comments are welcome!

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

These poems are fantastic! What I love the most is the emotions that you put in them, which I believe is the most important thing in poetry; to make the reader feel!. I think that these poems are really able to make the reader feel the emotions that they would if they were in that situation!. My favourite is "Beloved Grandpa" because I can relate to that one best, having lost a grandparent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.!. ur a really good poet!! lol especially for ur age!
i like the 'grandad' one!! its full of emotions and sympathy and ur grief!.!.!. i like it!.!. lol
you should put this on some compition cuase i think u have a chance to win! try to make a short story out of theses peoms so, that will be great!Www@QuestionHome@Com