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Question: Are you feeling hungry!?
a lite repast offered this morn
Appetite
An hour tastes fine
to those who pause
but to ponder a day…
requires an appetite!.
So too, a lifetime
as hunger calls to you!.
And will you fill
your plate, with this food
or are you…
just a dieter!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'll take a plateful of lifetime, huge side of laughter(don't be stingy with the giggles!), ocean of happy gravy, and a whole gallon of good dreams that come true!.!.!.!.!.thus, too, the poetry that will always bring out this answer!.!.!.right on time, Neon!!!!
Good Morning!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I guess this means if I don't strive to be more than I am, as well as take a few chances in life I'm stuck here without the banana pudding I so desire!.!.!. but I only thought it would take a few seconds, I didn't know it would take a lifetime!. note: I don't want a bowl, I want the whole darn thing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Hi!",
'Yes', your meals are always fulfilling and taste really sweet!."
WELL DONE!
Cheers!.
P!.S: don't cook in your poems to much!. My husband could taste the bacon from yours last time and it got me cooking at 4:am!. My household are all asleep!. (PEACE YAHHHHHH WOOHOOO!) : )
I'm enjoying being lazy reading poetry!.
Thanks for checking my poems out, : )Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like what you did with the metaphor!.!.!.you could easily expand this into a larger piece if you were so inclined--the central theme is strong (though of course that's up to you)!.
Best,
ToddWww@QuestionHome@Com
Oh, I just love this!. So different and clever!.
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i didnt know i was hungry for more, until i read this!.!.!.thank you for the right words at the right time!. please sir, may i have some more!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wonderful metaphoric poem!. I have been feasting on poetry!. I will never again be hungry as long as poets fill my plate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
When it comes to living, laughing and loving I have a very hearty appetite!.
Thank you for this, I enjoyed it very much!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Feed the hunger, but do not over stuff - or dieting will be a necessity!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The more I feast here, the more I forget mealtimes!.
" A jug of wine, a loaf of bread, and Thou" the best feast of all!Www@QuestionHome@Com
A mere nibble to excite the taste buds of the soul and start a craving!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Enjoyed it!.!.!.!.!.and hungry for more served by Neon!Www@QuestionHome@Com
haha yess!. todays my birthday!Www@QuestionHome@Com