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Question: Poetry Help!.!.!.!?
What poem do you like best!?

Do you have any suggestions for either!?!?!?
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Eachouthers hearts
we'll hold forever!.

From dawn, to dusk
and dusk, to dawn,
Forever!.

From then, to now
and From now, to then
Forever!.

From the begnning, to the end
and From that,
to the start,
Forever!.

Forever we'll stay,
and,
Forever we'll love,
Forever!.

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Eachouthers hearts
we'll hold forever!.

From dawn, to dusk
and dusk, to dawn,
Forever!.

From the begnning, to the end
and From that,
to the start,
Forever!.

Forever we'll stay,
and,
Forever we'll love,
Forever!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Eternal Love:
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The above can be the title
This poem is about love
and how devoted each person
is to the other one!.

The first line
Eachouthers heart
I would change that to
(In our hearts)
we'll hold forever
( we have one another )
I like how this goes
from dusk to dawn
and from dawn to dusk
This is saying day and night
night and day
From beginning to end
end to beginning
A love like this will go on forever
without any end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com