too live is evil,
evil is vile,
only to have lived and then on reflection
be the devil!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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evil is vile, only to have lived and then on reflection be the devil!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Matthew B, I haven't seen anyone yet who has come close to mirrored metaphor on this post and I commend your effort! May I have a shot at it!? LIVE EVIL A DEVIL LIVED A LIT TRAP 4 PART TIL HE LEVEL EHWww@QuestionHome@Com word play is fun, can you rewrite and edit this so your audience can follow you!? Then please repost it!? You cannot critique that which you can't understand!. Thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com Wonderful little poetic quip!Www@QuestionHome@Com Neither!.Www@QuestionHome@Com neither!.!.maybe you are puzzled by your own poetry!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com puzzlee:]!.!. i think like it rymes then at the same time you want to figure out what the helll it meanss:)Www@QuestionHome@Com what does "too live" mean!?Www@QuestionHome@Com ha, what a great little thing you have devised!. very good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |