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Question: Kingdom of God!.!.!.poem!.!.!.critque please!!?
In the kingdom of God everyone gets along,
So I guess God doesn't exist on this world!.
In the kingdom of God we all sing the same song,
So I guess God doesn't Exist on this world!.

When the young die young, who is there to explain,
I've seen one thousand crying mothers, dying from the pain!.

In the kingdom of god everyone acts the same,
Theres no massacre's and political campagins,
In the kingdom of God there will be no pain,
But pain is the only thing to make us feel,
So I'll take my time in hell,

In the kingdom of God Everyone learns to breath,
But all this polution must mean theres no God!.

In a world that doesn't care, I'll take me odds on a fiery demise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I believe in God, therefore I am in disagreement with the message!.

I understand your message, you are very upset with God right now!.

Again I pray you heal!. I starred your post, hopefully you`ll get better critics to answersWww@QuestionHome@Com

im for God, but i see where your coming from

this poem brings up questions and exserts lots of strong emotion!. its rather interesting to read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com