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Question: What do you thing of this!.!.!.!?

For every tear that falls
I will be there for you
For every inch of pain that you feel I will feel it to
I will be there for you through thick and thin
I will be your rock when you need me to be
I will always be there for you
For every heart ache you feel
I feel it to
For every ounce of misery you feel
I feel it to
What ever you do that makes you hurt
I will feel it
Love isn't something that you or I can run from
It's a feeling like no other
When you cry
I will cry with you
Through thick and thin I will always be there for you
When you feel like you have nothing left to live for
Remember me
I will always be there for you
For every time you smile
I will smile with you
For every tear that you cry out of joy
I will cry with you
I will always be there for youWww@QuestionHome@Com

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You know what I think about you!. I really enjoy when you write!.
And I think there is no problem with the Repetition!. This is a poetry!.When you repeat, you're showing your feelings with emphasis!.

I am not a writer!. But I still trying!.

Greetings!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think this is a beautiful poem - whoever it's about is very lucky!

Just one correction though: it should be 'I feel it too' not 'I feel it to'!. This is only a minor error - the rest of it is excellent!.

Please write more poems as you seem to have flair for it!

Good luck with your future endeavours

xWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds more like lyrics to a song than an actual poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's overly repetitious!.!. also, to in most places you've used it, should be too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's really good!!!
it would make a great song!!!!
keep up the good work ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very well,indeed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's Good!.
P!.S!. :_ How are you intending to choose a best answer for this question!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really like it!. you got your point across!. but there are some things you might want to change to make it flow better:

"For every inch of pain that you feel I will feel it to"
"For every bit of pain you feel I will feel it too"

"I will be there for you through thick and thin" < you say this line twice!. try to avoid repetition!.

"I will be your rock when you need me to be"
"I will be your (rock, firm/solid ground, foundation)
when you cannot stand"

"For every heart ache you feel
I feel it to
For every ounce of misery you feel
I feel it to
What ever you do that makes you hurt
I will feel it" <again try to avoid repitition!.
"For every heart ache you feel
My heart will ache too
For every ounce of misery you feel
I feel it too
What ever happens that makes you hurt
I will hurt too"

"Love isn't something that you or I can run from"
"Love is something that neither you nor/or I can run from"

"When you cry
I will cry with you!.!.!.
!.!.!.For every tear that you cry out of joy
I will cry with you" < repetition
try : "I shall cry too"

"I will always be there for you" < you repeat this line multiple times try to avoid repitition!.

these are a few things you can try!. i know i pointed out alot of the repition!.!.!.!. but i hope it helps!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is really beautiful, If it were dedicated to me, I would truly cry of joy, I give it an 11 out of 10 and I hope you dont mind if I save the poem, its beautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com

Eliseo
Si !.!.!.

besoWww@QuestionHome@Com

To whom is dedicated this poem!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

creo que a quien se lo dedicaste es afortunada
solo por curiosidad ?tienes galana!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

that please write beautiful poetry in Spanish is better listenWww@QuestionHome@Com