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Question: What do you think of my first ever Essence Poem!.!?
Hi, I am trying out new poetry!.

Essence
The Essence, created by Emily Romano is a short, structured form of two-lines,
six syllables each with an end rhyme and internal rhyme!.

Starved ants ravage their site,
Small beasts with savage bite!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Don't know this one!. Very Oriental!. Your example seems, to me, very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow that`s wonderful! I LOVE ANTS! lol!. I know this may sound weird but I got a little rush from your 2 line rhyme scheme!.

Ants are amazing!. I saw a tiny ant carrying a huge, dead butterfly once!. That sight was astonishing; when you think of the weight proportions!. The butterfly had to be more than 100 times it`s size!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think its a good essence
but maybe you should try to find something deeper
search inside yourself to find something important to you and make it into a metaphorWww@QuestionHome@Com

It can mean on the same line or line to line internal rhyme!.

These are nice short poems and your poem is particularly nice!. I like that both lines relate to each other!. Good JobWww@QuestionHome@Com

And maybe I am slow!.!.!.but where is the internal rhyme!? Internal means to me on the same line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

honestly i think lenghening the poem would be a good idea!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whoa! Ravage and savage sound like internal rhyme to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com