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Question: Hello, i have written a poetry and would like people to read it!!?
Love 101

Im on campus but they wont let me attend my classes
Give me one more chance and I swear I`ll pass it -
the test on what love is
I dont know how to live it, give it, receive it, or how to feel it,
but ill study hard, right from the start
So dont leave me alone
dont ignore me no more
open the door and let me take the test
on what love isWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i loved the beginning--i really did, but from the middle to the end, i felt like it needed something more!. Good job though, i really enjoyed it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

tat kool, i think it kinna funny after i finished read the entire poem!. i like how u combine the test on what love is n how they not let u take that class but y is "Love 101"!? Is there any meaning!? i'll give u 10 point!. yeaaa!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really liked it!

And it is "I have written a 'poem'" not 'poetry'!.

!. !. !. sorry, I couldn't help myself =)

But anyway, I really loved that perspective, good job!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Give it it a beat if you have good vocals and it would be a great song =] if you put more words to it! =] ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

good poem needs a little work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com