A poem would like comments thanks?

Question: A poem would like comments thanks!?

I found myself looking
for answers,
and all along it was etched
on my face,
my reflection don't
look that appealing,
just another soul fallen from grace!.

Yet I still have some dreams
to believe in,
I still want the dream, i can't lie,
I still want the song and the old country boy
telling me the reasons why!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I like it a lot!.Very deep and meaningful!.Keep on writing,and don't change anything in the poem!.It has soul and gutsWww@QuestionHome@Com

1st stanza -
**Line 5 - Don't should be doesn't
Line 6 - In my opinion, I would take out the word 'that'!. Possably use a word such as 'entirely', if you even want to replace the word 'that'
2nd stanza -
1st line - I would take out the word 'some', and not replace it!.
5th line - Possably take out the word 'the'

I am sorry I am being so picky!. If what i suggested isnt your style, by all means, don't change anything (except 1st stanze, 5th line)!. when i write my poems, I seem to always enjoy how the poem reads when you take out the smaller, over used words, as long as it will still make sence!.
I love the message behind this poem, it is a great start!.
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Answer mine please
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Very good poem, I like it a lot!. As for "don't" and "doesn't"!. That's no mistake here, that's artistic license!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

dude you need to work on it!. It's not horroble by it's lacking struture and life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, its very good!.!.!.!.!.!.
Congrats!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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