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Question: I was the fool!.!.!.!.be gentle its just a poem!?
started off cool that newschool colabo
cause our oldschool senior year groove proved she could hurt me to my soul
forgive and forget thats wat jesus say
deciding to rewind time emtying the mind of mines of all bad lyrics and scifer fought
Tic Tock
Yeah thats our clock
When you hear ticked mine would toc
Our biological clocks, but mines was a bit slower
You left me stranded in the past, gutter water soakin my ***, but for me to forgive you all you had to do was ask!.
Mama said stand in love dont fall in it, too late caught in a free fall , with dreams of white pickett fences and a lab named spot
**** that !
An apartment in New York and a Pitbull, yeah now das hip hop
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
^ harsh lol!.!.!.!."Mama said stand in love dont fall in it, too late caught in a free fall , with dreams of white pickett fences and a lab named spot" I like that!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You are no fool,
At least you tried,
just lost your way a little!.
Your words I read and understood
but for poetry you ain't ready!
just a little joke you understand! Actually I can see meaning in your verse!. Interesting,but needs some changes in order to make more sense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i don't know what to say!. this is hardly a poem!. i want to be gentle, but i want to say that my dogs come up with better stuff when they walk across the keyboard!.Www@QuestionHome@Com