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Question: A reposted poem due to small response!. Any comments!?
The sound of dancing windchimes
tells me there’s good sleeping in store;
delta breezes float
through windows and doors
as they will my dreams tonight!.
Coolness moves through the valley
pushing out all the heavy clouds
of yesterday’s disasters,
as if the breath of God had
come to restore the stars in the night sky
and hang the moon back in place!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I could say stop plagerizing yourself!.!.!.that was hilarious (just a funny coincidence nothing against smiley)!.
The last three lines have some beautiful phrasing!. Very evocative!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love the sounds of windchimes
and how they chime while dancing
in the wind!.
windchimes can be indoors or outdoors
If the windchimes are indoors the breezes goes
through the door and window!.
Make sure the wind is not too strong
or they can blow off!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Did you write it!? I found it at this website http://www!.poemhunter!.com/poem/fresh-air!.!.!.
Written by a poet named Carol Brunelle in 1946
If you just want comments on her work!? I don't care for windchimes so they don't help me sleep!. But the poem is good!.
Very nice to meet you then!. You have to understand this day and age with people stealing artists work why I asked!.
Your work is very descriptive!.!.!.!.!.very nice
I do really like Ancient Struggle
Since I have a 16 year old daughterWww@QuestionHome@Com
That is so beautiful!. I love 'dancing windchimes!.' Beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It reminds me of the song Summer Breeze and sound like peace was restored!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it's really calming and refreshing!. it flows nicely too!. well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it its relaxing :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
as they will my dreams tonight!!!!
very good I like it
Keep writing!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it alot!. well done and keep writing!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com