Poem??good?

Question: Poem!?!?good!?

open the door hey ole man
he turn to me water in his eys
so i glanced down to see what he was reading
to make him so sad
was a clip of ireland
cauze of a potato droupt ppl were starving

this puzzled me for many many days
of all the bads white ppl have done
you would think he would be glad

he wasnt crying from injustice
all those years he had recieved
his pain came not in a color
from hunger felt by his lil brotherWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It is an interesting poem, yet it does not rhyme!.

Your spelling is very poor, they do have a spell checker here!. If this is for class you need to correct that spelling and add more structure, possibly cadence rules or rhymes!.

It needs a bit o' work lass!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

is this racist!?Www@QuestionHome@Com