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pension book in hand at my local PO and stand in a queue with all those oldsters that I knew but now they've closed the office down and we must make it into town the bus pass gets us there for free but then we join the vast melee a single PO for everybod a single lady on her tod Cashier Number Three please Someone's sending a parcel to Belize We all turn to each other and say we're gonna be here all ****** day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Yes I will!. That's no poem, mate!. That's a doggerel, with coarse language!.Www@QuestionHome@Com To "berate" means to scold someone or tell them off!. I don't see how you can do that to a poem!. Perhaps you mean "belittle" - in which case, I'm right with you !Www@QuestionHome@Com BOO! HISS! SIT DOWN YER STUPID TRUNCATED PROSE MASQUERADING AS POETRY! YOU WANKAAAAA!Www@QuestionHome@Com I see your trying to illuminate us on the frustrations of old folk,nice to see someone thinking about them!.we all gotta grow old sometime!.Www@QuestionHome@Com OK, so where's the poem!?Www@QuestionHome@Com it's O!.K!.Www@QuestionHome@Com not the most imaginative or creative "poet" are we!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |