Storm coming
by C!.S!. Scotkin
Winds chastise trees;
some oranges will never
see the dawn of December!.
Winds spit sand
through the screens
my chair rocks crazily…
Suddenly cooler
by twenty degrees
of separation from the day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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by C!.S!. Scotkin Winds chastise trees; some oranges will never see the dawn of December!. Winds spit sand through the screens my chair rocks crazily… Suddenly cooler by twenty degrees of separation from the day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: An interesting visual piece of prose "Winds spit sand" I like that!. When I was a kid, oh, some 70 years ago now!. I would sit on an old sofa up in my bedroom which overlooked a field!. I would watch the lumbering dark clouds roll in on thunderous wheels!. All against a background of a slate blue of the sky!. RobertWww@QuestionHome@Com From my Summer Kitchen/study I watch the storms over the waters!. I prefer afternoon storms, so that I can see Ocean in all his moods!. To me, an afternoon storm can be an afternoon delight!. Storms in the dark bother me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love evening storms!. I'll go out on the front porch and watch the lightning, and if I'm feeling especially zany, I'll go out and dance in the rain!. What I'd give for it to be twenty degrees cooler here, though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Indeed! I relish them!. The sudden spiral of temperatures!.!.!.down (in some cases) from the daytime high of 90 to 50!.!.!.is a real treat!. The rains, since we live in a high desert area!.!.!.are more than welcome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Great images of the evening storm!. I love the chair rocks crazily and suddenly cooler by twenty degrees!. Oh, I like each stanza! Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Winds gather up whispered leafy thoughts soaked by the mornings dew and then send them spraying down on me, leaving their essence seeping into my hair, dripping into my mind!. !.!.!. I do love stormsWww@QuestionHome@Com I love evening storms more then your poem that's for sure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "Degrees of separation from the day" great line! I like this style!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |