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Question: What do you think of my Al Gore poem!?
I wrote this before I really payed attention to politics in my highschool freshmen year!. I'm revisiting it 5 years later, and I think it has potential, suggestions!?

Among thye ugliness of
progression
Nature struggles to
survive in procession!.

The simple beauty of
a complex design
Washes away all worries
in a dramatic human
mind!.

The wind dances with
the leaves; loving and tender!.
Will ever a poetic sense
consume the mind and
a beauty in all they'll render!?

Clouds float heavenly out
of man's reach,
But not their fumes!.
So to you I beseech!.

Enjoy the beauty now
while it lasts!.
There is not guarantee of a
breathtaking future as was in our pasts!.

All this destruction is
aimless and irrelovent!.
Your so called constuction
is an illness of molevolence!.

For this illnes,
is there no cure!?
May we keep our forgotten
innocence and beauty pure!?

Cars are busy and so
are their drivers!.
Help keep our world
free of dangerous contrivers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i so wish i could write like that that poem was amazing and it doesn't need anything added or taken awayWww@QuestionHome@Com

You forgot to mention his housekeepers can not use his bathroom!.Www@QuestionHome@Com