Critique My Poem: The world of love?

Question: Critique My Poem: The world of love!?

The World of Love
Can be bitter or can be sweet
It is world of conquer and retreat
It can taste honey
It can taste salt and pepper
So before you enter this world
You need to have precautions
Wear your shiny armor
And move forward
Or carry a bouquet of flowers
Winning hearts and seducing a loversWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

sounds awesome, keep up the good work
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It's a good poem, but personally i feel if it's going to rhyme in the beginning, then why can't the rest rhyme!? Or maybe just no rhyming at all!? I am a published poet!. I like where your head is at though!. I give it 8/10!. Just needs to flow a little better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's ok !.!.!.i mean could be funnier! (-; soz i just like funny poetry!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes you are rightWww@QuestionHome@Com