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Question: What do you thinkof my poem!?
I wonder what you feel
When you think about what you did
Could you possibly feel what I do!?
Your face in my head
Scarring my every thought too
Could you possibly feel what I do!?
You were never here!.
All these years,
Waking up in tears!.
Crying
Dying
But I still kept trying
My frail heart still burning
Thought that I would let
You hurt me is surprising
The last time we talked
Was a blur
Pointless
U didn’t even know me!.
Do I ever cross your mind!?
Do I ever linger through your dreams!?
To see you one more time would be a blessing
My head hates you
My heart is forever missing!.
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its decent, the flow seems a bit off and its rather cliche!. try being a bit more creative!.

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Oh! I think it's a good one!. Keep it up!!! Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com