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Question: I don't know if this short poems any good please read and reply!?
Slowley the time
passes away,
Ages gone by all history,
An endless void,
Into the abyss,
No one can hold,
and no one will miss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i think this poem is excellent, thank youWww@QuestionHome@Com

Time doesn't pass slowly!.
Voids are not endless but empty
History is actually recorded
and regarded as important!.

You should have written poem's
and Slowly

Read poetry, lots of itWww@QuestionHome@Com