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Position:Home>Poetry> Poem help please.?Question: Poem help please!.!? I gaze out into the midnight sky
A full moon waits to rise Only under its glare Can I escape from fear The thoughts of death and dispair Seem to disappear I start to feel calm As the moon holds me in its palm Help!. I need help with a title and maybe some more to add to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: well you have personified the moon!. so mayb a reference to it being human in the title!? you need to describe the moon more!. considering its the focus of the poem there is nothing to describe it!. A fading pale eyeball casting light, i watch it fall beneath the stars resting on the horizon!. i have used enjambent, a metaphor, and personification of the moon!. (i have also described the moon!)Www@QuestionHome@Com As the moon holds me in its palm Can I escape from fear I start to feel clam Only under its glare When the thought of death and dispair Seem to disappear As I glaze out into the midnight I could see the moons light thats my little remix of ur poem!. i like urs better ^^ lol the tittle of ur poem should be!.!.hmmmm!.!.!.The Moon's GlareWww@QuestionHome@Com chicken chop suey the meat tastes gooey because they choke their chickens like the hong kong phooeyWww@QuestionHome@Com submit it on fictionpress!.com you'll get better suggestions there than here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |