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Question: A poem of mine!. Do you get the feeling!?
It's not a proper rhyming poem, it's meant to convey a feeling!.
Please feel free to tell me what you think

Man you gotta wake up and see
I won't take orders for much longer
I just wait til I'm round the corner
Till I put my make-up on

I wear trousers when you're not there
I dance to the radio's songs
I touch the ceiling, I email boys
I even slide down the bannister!.

I'm not going to stay behind
And be what you want me to be
I'm going to follow my dreams
But I'm not leaving my siblings behind

You can like it or lump it mate
There are worse things in life to do
Than to become a singer, and dance on stage
I mean, you could be a lawyer (ouch!)

You'lll never read this poem
You'll never dream that I wrote it
You'll never feel how it hurts to be told
Not to wear a pink pair of shoesWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
lol!. i could totally relate!!!! LOL!. i thought it was brillant!. 9/10/ :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

remember,
most poems dont rhyme at all!.
and yours was AMAZING because it didnt!.

i wouldnt change any of that!.

many girls can relate !.
i know i can!.!.
Especially with my dad!.

i FULLY got the feeling of your poem!.

( hope i helped )

read mine!?
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

got the feeling! break away!Www@QuestionHome@Com

you did a very good job of conveying your feeling!.
And, yes I did !Www@QuestionHome@Com