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Question: Do you like my poem!? It's called, "Do I have mom's smile!?" And it's about My dad!.!?
Ok well my mom divorced my dad and now when my dad looks at me (he rarely does) I see in his face that he sees my mom instead of me!. I'm only12!. And I'm with my grandparents a lot because of him!. My mom got better though, but when I try to tell him that he won't understand!. Well here's the poem I wrote about it!.
You always say Mom is to blame,
But don't you see!? She's not the same!
Ever since she left you for him,
Your smile's been broken, your heart dim!.
Why won't you look at me!?
Is it Mom that you see!?
Do I smile like her!?
Do I look like my mother!?
I know you are broken, I would be too!.
But what if SHE said I looked just like YOU!?
Why don't you see that Mom's gotten better!?
She's back towho she was when you met her!
Either way, I'm Julia, who cares who I look like!?
I'm YOUR Daughter, and You should Accept That!
It may not be that great cuz I wrote it in under 5 minutes!. lol!. What do ya think!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow!. Not only does that express exactly how you've been feeling but it also flows naturally!. If you really did that in under five minutes then you have a talent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i love it!. i can really feel your emotions and thoughts in this!.!. you described it perfectly and the questions make it all real!. definitely keep writing, it will take you places!
please read my poem!? =]
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Totally cool and amazing! If you did it in around 5 minutes, that's incredible too!
Send it to your Dad, maybe he'll get the message!. It's really heartfelt and gets the message across well!
xxWww@QuestionHome@Com
That's beautiful you should send it to your mom and dad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
that is amazing!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Pretty Good for a under 5 min poem :-) Props to you! =DWww@QuestionHome@Com
thats really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com
good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com