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Question: Is this a proper place to post a poem!?
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THE GREATEST SHOW ON MARS

A hush falls over the crowd,
Leon, Felix and Woodrow Wilson (Toy Fox Terrier)
Gasp as TD steps onto the wire…

Hovering three, maybe four inches
above the Armstrong linoleum,
Suspended seemingly weightless…

He takes his first step,
Felix hides behind Leon,
“Regarde!” TD Shouts…

Just then, he flips over
one and one half times,
landing on his head,
never dropping one morsel of Cheerios…

Barks and purring signal a theatrical success!

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
your audience applauds as well!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.excellent work here, a poem of equal performance!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Degree of difficulty: 9!.99
Execution Score: 9!.925
Artistic Merit: 9!.826
Final Placing: Gold medal
Response of Pets: Priceless

"For everything else there's Mastered Hard"

Thank goodness it wasn't a trip wire, you could have bombed!Www@QuestionHome@Com

As great as you write anywhere would be a great place for your poems !.This was funny with Woodrow Wilson and the cheerios!.and you on the tight wire!.Sometimes life is like walking on a high tight wire!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

So now you get a biscuit! Sorry couldn't help myself! Great Poem!! As far as this a proper place to post a poem-- if you think it is, then it must be! Everyone in tittled to their opinion!!! Cheers!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Why not if you want people to see and read it!.This is just a good place to get started!. Besides you've already done it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Masquerade not
Alien life form
Renounce yourselves!!
Speak of poetry freely!.!.!.

A pleasure, as always,
TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",

WELL DONE!
I applaud you my dear friend, Now this was entertainning!.

Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Duality (triality!?) again!. I thought the wire walker was Harlequin!. In any case, multitasking is fun, n'est-ce pas!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bravo! Encore!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It was actually interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMGosh!.!.!.what did you put in that bowl with your cheerios!?
You are so funny!. Thanks for the giggle :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

The Show Must Go On
but i never did like Cheerios!.!.!.do they have Ricicles on Mars!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

What a picture! Bravo! And a one point landing as well!.!.!.wow!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Are you on R&R this weekend!?
I'd like to see that trick!Www@QuestionHome@Com