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I keep waiting for him

but, he does not come

glowing dim as many embers

pieces of life

passed and done

embracing a vision

percieving things

where I desire them to be

bleak reality

oh how I wish it to be

so far off from meWww@QuestionHome@Com

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that is very passionate!. i love it!. most women feel that way!. but you made it into n artform in writting!. dragon girl is write!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITWww@QuestionHome@Com

I would title it "Pieces of Life!.!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

this sounds like what i feel!.!.!.i liked it,
keep writing!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I feel u girl honestly !. I think it is wonderfulWww@QuestionHome@Com