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MOSE-PORSAIC The spirit of man is a damp and musty tarpaulin, draped over humanity en masse, The light shines through only when someone pushes up, Viewed from above, you can see the peaks, and whose pushing, From underneath the canopy, We sigh in relief when a cool wind sooths us, But we do not question where it comes from!. *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: So I come back one day earlier from my vacation in the middle of nowhere because of the Tour de France, just to find out that you now write Pos!? I also like peaks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I don't think it's lacking at all!. I'm getting that it's about individuality and the desire to break free from the norm and, in the process of this break, inviting change and creating room for the rest of human spirit to grow!. Maybe I've read too much into it, but this is what I got from it and I really like the idea of it!. Great Job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "Hi!", Well, you said it!.!.!.!.!. I'm sory!. It's a little over my head!. Ok A LOT!. This poem is not for simple minded people like me LOL : ) I work with 1 brain cell at a time and none after 3:AM!. I'm not going To say well done, but i will say interesting!. This may be one of the reasons why I haven't seen you all night amongst the sorting of which picture needs more plastic surgery and a lip-o-suction!. LOL : ) Cheers!. P!.S: Try do something with the last picture I sent you as all the rest is scaring me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Po!? that word means 2 things to me!.!.!.!. 1) 'bum' in German 2) the panda in Kung Fu Panda what were you meaning!? =P good poem, though incomplete!. i like the ending as it is =]Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a good analogy of spirit and also for what my pusher may provide!. Oaxaca, machaca, I don't care where it comes from!. ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com Yo, no mo' better porse Bro! Good a zephyr! It's got heart, nature, weather and plastic sheating with a subtle message!. Nobody does that combo like you!. Is done, is good!. move on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Watch out for that wind!. Hold onto the boom next time, Sensei!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Not incomplete!.!.!.as is makes all the sense needed!.!.!.!.good! Goof off!.!.!.tomorrow!.!.!.!.!.!.well, tomorrow will be here, if not there!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Looks and reads like a PO-EM to me!. And the rain falls on the just and the unjust!. I'm not sure I'd have made that rule!.Www@QuestionHome@Com a starWww@QuestionHome@Com |