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Question: Superhero!!?
She doesn't wear black rubber
or bold red ad blue tights
She doesn't have a spider sense
or evil geniuses to fight

She doesn't have a utility belt
or automatic claws
She isn't an alien for krypton
no, she's got some human flaws

She can't slay vampires
and she can't use the force
She doesn't fight the matrix
or have a diet cola to endorse

She can't control the weather
or levitate high and low
Nor turn green when she gets mad
but she is my superhero

She is not a psychic
but what I hide she can see
She can't teleport herself and yet
she is always somehow there for me

She has no power over water
so there is no sea to part
She doesn't have x-ray vision
but knows what's on my heart

She doesn't have an invisible plane
nope, not the Superman I like
She doesn't own a bat mobile
just a 12-speed mountain bike

She doesn't have a lasso of truth
or a signal in the sky
But she still flies over just in time
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to wipe my tears when I cry

She doesn't have laser vision
or talk to animals of any kind
She isn't telepathic
but can always read my mind

She can't control fire
or have the ability to heal
The only super thing about her
is the way she makes me feel

She might not be a superhuman
but she always makes me feel good
And if she could fly to my rescue
both God and I know she would

You might think she is a nobody
just your average sort of joe
But I tell you what, you're wrong
Sophia Wyatt is my Superhero!!

It took me a while to make and no, I'm not a fag for making poetry I just wanted to express how I felt!. I appreciate any comments!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
E-X-C-E-L-L-E-N-T poem!
Different, funny, and sweet! Great work!. Keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow that was really good, great job man its so different from all the sad poems I read but in a good way!. anyways dude you have talent I hope you keep writting!. A+ work!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol this was an awesome poem! its cool because shes different then everyone!. :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a good experiment, but I would try writing it again, from a different perspective--maybe that of her mortal enemy, or her mom, or herself!. also, don't be afraid to work with the style!. This form, while popular with beginning poets, is tough to make very interesting because no matter how good a writer you are, it always sounds "sing-songy!."Www@QuestionHome@Com