Part VI, nearing the end. How can I make it better?

Question: Part VI, nearing the end!. How can I make it better!?

Demused-Evolution of a Poet VI

Little by little,
my darkness faded,
her light shone
in my eyes!.

When I was with her,
I was beautiful!.
When I was with her,
my soul had
no age,
and I wrote eternity

with her name!.

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This is lovely!. The darkness of the soul purged by the writing of poetry and the emergent light is a thing of beauty!. The poet in this series is metamorphosing, transforming, and it seems as though it is all due to the muse!. Fascinating!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think the smallness of these poems makes it more manageable for others to read!.!.!. however that may come at a price, some will give much shorter answers because they have been placed into that 'quick' funk!.!.!. but this is wonderful and thrilling nonetheless!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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