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Question: To quote Siren, are you bored yet!?
Demused-Evolution of a Poet III
My pain
pulled lashes
from my eyes,
cold clear blue,
unshielded, vulnerable,
frenetic vision
given blinders
of hypocrisy!.
I reached for my freedom,
her diamond nailed hand,
and I bled from her touch!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
easy droplets to pay in passion
might sow a term for bother,
so be careful of how much
or when, we water!.
i hope the lashes grow back!. lol
that is a great first line Eva!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Urgency and violent emotion in this one!.!.!.it is provocative, it leaves me wanting more, it is insistent!. I am compelled to go on!.!.!.Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This makes me want to defend myself with an old rotary-dial telephone, or semaphore flags!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
1,2,3!.!.!.pen on!.!.!.they grab and entice!. Stars rising!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is so visual, so poignant and profound!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
OUCH! That is really all I can say and I am off to read the rest of your "short" series!.!.!.!. and no, we are not bored!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com