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Question: I was wondering if this made sense!?
I just wrote this poem:
"Mission control"
Before the poets narriated it,
before the singers sung it,
before the drummer drummed it,
before the guitarist strummed it,
as coming is to going,
knowing is always better than not
knowing where we stand, at each
day in our lives, fact is, at some point
in this ordeal, we will hav a strong urge
to banish each other,
truth is, we will always be the super powers
of our fate, in which rests in our will to come out
on top, not in the space race, but in the space
between life and death, If the decision is made to
abort the mission early, be merciful at my reentry intoWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think it was excellent ans stright to the point!. Meaning before we become pros we start as amatuers!. Before death their life!. Just like when a mother is pregnant before the nines is up before the baby comes out, the mother already loves and accepts the child!. Everyone is as at a different level in their lives in every season!.
I think you poem means everyday someone is getting either fired, promoted, dying, or just coming into the worlds!. Life still goes on!.
I thought it was excellent!. I think you got skills!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whoa! That's actually pretty awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is it about suicide!?

I don't know, it didn't make much sense to me but i am never very good at understanding poetry, sorry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that was really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com