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Question: Another poem!.!?
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Extra sweet, with a flower on the side,
Hundreds of colors, not just for the eye,
A picture, one hundred memories unwind,
Those wonderful notes, ringing in my ears,
A soft kiss, the last thing I know,
As I drift into a forever sleep!.


(no I'm not suicidal it's just what came to mind, and it describes things around me)

<3

~an average girlWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
*applauds* it is a good poem! i like the fact that it is vivid and i can picture what you are writing about! the meaning as Kay said is wonderful! keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it! XD! The rhyming and meaning are the best part!Www@QuestionHome@Com