Read, Comment, Critique?

Question: Read, Comment, Critique!?

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Just a small collection of poems, I would appreciate getting more readers and ratings!. Please comment/critique!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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thought all seven chapters were excellent!.

Chapter one was about not making smart choices in choices who we hand out with and date!. When we fall down those so called people we choose to hang with are no where to be found!. We find our selves afraid of our own shadow lost and alone!. Somehow we manage to pick ourselves help!.

Chapter two was about everyone help one other!.

chapter3 was about wanting everyone to see out talents on a stage in front of people!. Kind of like Beyonce or Angela Bassets!.

chapter4 was about instead of hanging out, dating,gossiping, read a book!. reading a book will give you a whole of knowledge and make you smarter!. a book won't get you in trouble!. A book can't mistreat you!.

chapter five was about growing up changing from the little girl with no smarts or knowledge into a women with maturity, moral, and accepts that life can bring!.

chapter six was about something was make a mistake or say the wrong thing!. People won't let you forget!. When you try to better yourself people find a way to bring up that one thing to make you fall back down and crack!.

Lastly chapter seven was about wanting and waiting for your dreams to come true!. Praying nothing happens!. As if God forgot about you/me!. That is where I am at right now!.
I want to be a movie star like Vivca A!. Fox/Queen Latifiah etc!.
Don't know how to get started or where or what schools have classes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com