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Question: Sleep of the dawn!?
falling quick
fumble threw the stick garden!.
pricks of concuss theology!.
the madness of the inward biology!.
twisted flocks
subconscious shocks!.
low rider!.
callused knuckle clenched!.
gear shift stretched!.
the visions fly by!.
but Bern threw the dirt as they die!.
rebirth of self!.
that is yet to see!.
a splatter of who we look back and long to free!.
dance and flow in the currant!.
blink !.
smash, turbulent ascent!.

Miltie layer
becoming the self slayer!.
peal the funyon!.
and Spackle self hypocrisy!.
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