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Question: Is this naked as a Jaybird!?
i have a new shirt
and its not clothes!.
its the kind you dont buy
or can barely see!.
but you put it on
and feel its skin,
funny how you know
where its been!.

so i think i better get pants now
you cant go to town without
how do i find some!?
the mind with simple route!.

searching around
i did get some stares!.
maybe its my shoes
or my socks striped glare!.

but old man comes to me
says my flys probably down,
or better get drawers!
son, is that how you do
all your chores!?

i said i totally knew that
what do you suggest
he said dont be afraid to
wear the old ones with quest!.

but i lost them dear sir
i lost them forever!.!.!.
and then he asked a nice blurt
where does one find
that heartshaped shirt!?

i knew what he meant
right then and there,
ran all the way home
socks and shoes windy air!.!.!.

and right where i remember,
in hem a secret note,
"i love you honey,
dont forget
your funny coat"Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Farmer, eh!? Stick to feeding chickens is all I can humbly suggest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I must agree with Dondi, only this is so clever, and cute, and funny, and completely in your style that I am laughing and intrigued by its depth all at the same time!. Excellent work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love how it was long but it read with such condense clarity that I sped through it!.!.!. twice! I do not profess to know all the meaning of this, but I know it to be there and for the present, I am satisfied!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The emporer's new clothes!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

amazingWww@QuestionHome@Com

About as funny as it gets, she said blushing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Farmer,

You are turning into a lean, mean poetry machine!!
Grade A -Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol, nice one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is funny but you need to work more in making it shine!. First, get that coat off! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

lolWww@QuestionHome@Com