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Question: What do you do when your poem gets too upitty!?
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FRIGGEN GENIUS

The terra firma
Archimedes needs
to lever the Earth out of orbit
does not exist!.

Of the terrestrials,
Earth has the greatest mass,
and who knows how
a gas giant will react to being levered!?

So, we will melt down Ceres
in a forge on Jupitor,
make a lever long enough
to reach from Saturn to here,
then pry ourselves out of
rhythm with the universe…Brilliant!

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
There's nothing worse than an uppity poem!.
I send that sucker straight on home!.
I like my verse behind a tree
Or in a hole, obeying me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

We are already out of rhythm with the universe!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",
I missed out on desert last night, It looked really good!. But the trip to Saturn made up for that!. : )

WELL DONE!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, it is!Www@QuestionHome@Com