More of these Dadaesque tone poems; exercises in sound. Do you like this one?

Question: More of these Dadaesque tone poems; exercises in sound!. Do you like this one!?

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SOL ETUDE

Sun hot
Sand hot
Sun on
Sandlot

Bright white
Daylight
Play time
Delight

I say
We go
Lake
Winnebago

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This one is really fun!
Lake Winnebago is in WI!. Need directions!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your étude can be sung to Chopin's, Op!. 10, no!. 9; but his étude is not in Sol, but the minor key of Fa!.

Your Eng-ga-lund Converb has one sharp, however; so it is in the key of Sol!.

Sol(i)tude indeed, J!. Alfred, if `we go/Lake/Winnebago!.'Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",
Great poem!. I did have more to say, but my laptop just got disconnected from the Internet and I can't be bothered to re-type it!.

All I've got to say is:
"Take me to Winnebago"!.

WELL DONE!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like fun!.!.!.the poem and a trip to the lake sounds like fun!. I love to play with words too!. Play on ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the sound - especially the first stanza ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

In a Winnebago!? Nice sounds!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what wistful wanker would wallow woefully wondering, will Willi wear washed women's worn wear with Worcestershire!?-blureyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Great ! I tried it with "Ford Transit Camper Van" but it's not the same !Www@QuestionHome@Com

Like all your serious poems, it sings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A popsicle for my overheated brain! Cool!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was extremely cool!. I haven't seen something like this done before!. It has a quirky kind of logic to it!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have room for one more!? Cheers!!Www@QuestionHome@Com