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Question: Would man accept an Angel should she be sent to them!?
Wings alight in meadows
Angel in a female form
The long grass whispers in the wind
all the world bends
Fire beneath my breast
beats to a drumming tone
fear to face the world
for within it being me
is blasphemy!
Gentle as the Sea dust
my hair hangs down, unbound
Tear like fragile, spider thread
weaves its’ way to the Earth
How I wish now
to be without these wings of grace
For even though I would be fallen
I could be accepted
not exiled…
as an angel always is when sent to man
-This is not me speaking but the angel… but part of me rest within the fires beating within her… I would love to hear your thoughts…
Blessed Be in the Freeing of an Earth-Bound Angel, SirenWww@QuestionHome@Com
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I love the use of similes in this poem!. It really helps me picture the scene and the angel!. You use such powerful words to convey your message in this poems!. I think everyone can relate to the feeling of having different parts of you wanting to speak, and all clamoring to be expressed!. I found it easy to lose myself in this poem, no matter how short it was!. You did not have to get too wordy to make it great!.
Are you going to make this a series!? That would be great if you did!. I think this would be very easy to continue, and would be completely original!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is absolutely exquisite, rich in beautiful imagery and as graced as the angel of whom you write!. One of your very best!. I can see her, with her "wings alight in meadows", a lovely vision, even in her exiled sorrow!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Don't kid yourself, this poem IS about you!. And that's why it is so beautiful and elegant!. There is a problem though!. It seems to alternate between being told by and being told about the subject!. Therein lies the confusion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I have always felt as if I have been blessed with an angel around me!. I know I have an angel that lives with me each and every day!. Wonderful poem!.
Peace & Love :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I've had my angel for 23 years and counting!. Great poetic reminder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com