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Question: My life check my poem please ;)!?
my life seem to loose color
i don't know why
i simply wanna fly
looking at the grey sky
i realize
i will never fly
i lost my wings
i lost my way
i wont be the same
this is awful
i simply don't know why
i'm gonna cry
i just wanna fly
but is imposible now
i found my wings
they are black and broken now
and i know
i will never flyWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this is a very powerful poem and anyone with good taste would see this!. It is an amazing, unique poem!. And anyone who can feel this way will respect it even more than I do, and I do a lot!. Please write more and keep me posted!. would recommend sending it in to magazines or to poetry contests!. again, it is awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Maybe it could use a bit better flow but it was one of the most unique poems ive read (which is a good thing dont wry!)!. It was really great even though it was very sad!. Keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats an amazing poem! A little sad but really really well written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, I liked the poem, sad but very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really like it
:0Www@QuestionHome@Com