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Question: Have you seen the Full Moon!?
Full Moon
by Elaine P

Luna, lone swimmer,
floats through the heavens,
bathes in Sol’s glory,
shines through the night!.

Bright is her mantle,
lighting Earth’s dark skies,
great is her power;
she rules the tides!.

Poets regard her,
feel passion rising,
sing to the rhythm
of furious waves!.

A Universe beckons,
they reach to follow
her golden pathway
to freedom’s gate!.

Luna, resplendent,
rules until morning
full in the night sky,
outshines the stars!.

Gravity lessens,
now they are soaring,
free from Earth’s bound’ries
heading for Mars!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Whatever happened to poems that rhyme!?

PS - No, except for the final words of the last two stanzas, this poem does not rhyme!. The other stanzas are assonant!. You have some studying to do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, this poem most definitely rhymes and has a flow as smooth as Luna's light peering through a window!. I don't know why the soon to arrive full moon is always a source of inspiration, but it is!. You have stated that beautifully and gently in this poem, especially in stanza 3!.

Thank you for this beautiful glimpse of the moon, and your soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awesome comfort, "outshines the stars" I enjoy this poem,
excellent! I like to watch "moon glow" Especially "harvest moon" the brightness at that time is a wonder!. Bravo!

It always befuddles me! why some people do not lap up
flowing in depth penned words for soul's enjoyment, rather then some picky comment, Usually those who do not post a poem of there own!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Biggie can bite my biggie, and I won't even give it a thumbs down!. Of course, I never give thumbs down, but that's just me!.
The other thing that is just me is that I like it the way it is!. You have done an excellent job with the moon, and the only way I ever see my own full moon, is in the mirrors!. Of course there were many to see it in my youth, as it had a habit of sticking itself out the car windows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love all your work!. And biggie,when you can write the way Elaine can then let us know!. Otherwise your rude comments mean nothing to us!. Why don`t you tell her what a beautiful poem this Is!. Wouldn`t that be the better way to go!? Think about It!.
Could someone please tell me If this Is a man or a woman!.
Is this a mr biggie or a mrs biggie!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",
My favorite place is the universe itself!.
Wonderful poem, thanks for the space flight!.

Yes it dose rhyme!. Dyslexia's kicked in I think!.
Let's hope mine doesn't, can get quite annoying!.

Wonderful poem!.

WELL DONE!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your poem sings to me, My name means moon goddess, from
Mt!. Cynthos, home to Diana, Goddess of the Moon!.
You can even dance to this! Elegant! However, you might want to take Biggie's suggestion!.!.!.have you ever gone to a site called www!.poetsofmars!.com!? I commend it to you!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A lovely tribute to Luna!.!.!.glowing beacon in the darkness where dreams are explored and imaginations grow!. Wonderful poem, excellent use of imagery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i always look to the moon
to see the light on its shape!.
it gives many things!.
!.!.and one of them is your really good poem!
i liked it Elaine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love the full moon and all of it's mystery!. Your poem describes it perfectly!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Owwwwooooooo! I seen delight! oh yeah!

OO: Orbit One to Houston, come in Houston
H: We copy Orbit One!. Is there a problem!?
OO: Nope!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Another very nice four letter word! Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh my god!!!! What makes you literally intelligent!!? How great thou art! You are creative!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This one is beautiful!.!.!.it should be your first one in the book!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful poem, can you send it to my email!?Www@QuestionHome@Com